假如你是李華,你的美國筆友Tom給你發(fā)來電子郵件,詢問你所在城市存在的問題。請你根據下面的提示信息給他回復郵件,并給出解決這些問題的方法。JMm答案圈

提示:1.車輛太多導致空氣污染嚴重;JMm答案圈

2.許多人來到城市找工作造成城市擁擠,沒有足夠的學校和醫(yī)院。JMm答案圈

【審題思路】JMm答案圈

1.審人稱:文章主要介紹城市存在的問題,主體為城市,故用第三人稱。JMm答案圈

2.審時態(tài):文章主要介紹城市存在的問題以及解決問題的方法,故以一般現在時為主。JMm答案圈

3.注意事項:JMm答案圈

(  1  )文章以應用文為框架,說明文為主體,因此要注意寫作格式;JMm答案圈

(  2  )列舉城市存在的問題以及提出解決問題的方法時,可用表示順序的詞匯銜接。JMm答案圈

【寫作提綱】JMm答案圈

1.開篇點題:There are some problems in my city.JMm答案圈

2.介紹具體的問題:First,there is too much air pollution because of...Second...JMm答案圈

3.解決方法:I think the government...JMm答案圈

4.美好心愿:I believe...JMm答案圈

【優(yōu)秀范文】JMm答案圈

Dear Tom,JMm答案圈

There are some problems in my city.First,there’s too much air pollution because of too much traffic.Second,because many people come to the city to look for jobs,it becomes very crowded.And the city doesn’t have enough schools or hospitals.JMm答案圈

I think the government should do something to solve the problems.First,it should offer enough buses so that we won’t use cars so often.Then there will be more fresh air.Next,it should build more schools and hospitals.JMm答案圈

I believe as long as we try our best,everything will be better and better.JMm答案圈

Yours,JMm答案圈

Li HuaJMm答案圈