【典型例題】vMk答案圈

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示,以“Keep safe in the street”為題,寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。先簡(jiǎn)單描述一下事故發(fā)生的經(jīng)過(guò),再給其他騎車(chē)上學(xué)的同學(xué)提供兩條安全建議。vMk答案圈

提示:今天早上,在你騎車(chē)上學(xué)的路上,一輛公交車(chē)正停在站牌處。由于你在聽(tīng)音樂(lè),沒(méi)有注意到,所以你沒(méi)能及時(shí)剎車(chē),撞到了公交車(chē)的后部并從自行車(chē)上摔了下來(lái)。幸運(yùn)的是,你傷得不重,并且有一位路過(guò)的同學(xué)幫助了你。vMk答案圈

【審題思路】vMk答案圈

1.審人稱(chēng):文章主要涉及介紹“我”上學(xué)路上發(fā)生事故的經(jīng)過(guò)以及提供建議,主體是“我”,故用第一人稱(chēng)。vMk答案圈

2.審時(shí)態(tài):文章主要介紹過(guò)去發(fā)生的事件,并對(duì)事件的經(jīng)過(guò)進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)要描述,故用一般過(guò)去時(shí)和過(guò)去進(jìn)行時(shí)。vMk答案圈

3.注意事項(xiàng):vMk答案圈

(  1  )注意正確運(yùn)用過(guò)去進(jìn)行時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)。vMk答案圈

(  2  )敘述事件時(shí),前后往往要用提示性的語(yǔ)句使文章過(guò)渡自然,如this morning,one day等表示時(shí)間的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)。vMk答案圈

(  3  )當(dāng)兩個(gè)動(dòng)作同時(shí)發(fā)生時(shí),可用when,while,as soon as等連接。vMk答案圈

【寫(xiě)作提綱】vMk答案圈

1.按時(shí)間順序描述事故的經(jīng)過(guò):This morning,I rode...At that time,I was listening to...vMk答案圈

2.提供兩條安全建議:when...don’t ride too fast,don’t...And we had better...vMk答案圈

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【優(yōu)秀范文】vMk答案圈

Keep safe in the streetvMk答案圈

This morning,I rode a bike on my way to school.A bus stopped at the bus stop.At that time,I was listening to music,so I couldn’t be in time to put on the brake.I hit the back of the bus and fell off my bike.Luckily,I wasn’t badly hurt and a kind student helped me.I’m very sorry for that.I didn’t think about the risk of an accident.So when we’re on our bikes,don’t ride too fast,don’t ride side by side with friends and don’t use our mobile phones.And we had better not listen to music.We must keep safe in the street.vMk答案圈