Keep safe in the street英語作文 關于Keep safe in the street的英語作文

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請根據(jù)以下提示,以“Keep safe in the street”為題,寫一篇英語短文。先簡單描述一下事故發(fā)生的經(jīng)過,再給其他騎車上學的同學提供兩條安全建議。vMk答案圈

提示:今天早上,在你騎車上學的路上,一輛公交車正停在站牌處。由于你在聽音樂,沒有注意到,所以你沒能及時剎車,撞到了公交車的后部并從自行車上摔了下來。幸運的是,你傷得不重,并且有一位路過的同學幫助了你。vMk答案圈

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1.審人稱:文章主要涉及介紹“我”上學路上發(fā)生事故的經(jīng)過以及提供建議,主體是“我”,故用第一人稱。vMk答案圈

2.審時態(tài):文章主要介紹過去發(fā)生的事件,并對事件的經(jīng)過進行簡要描述,故用一般過去時和過去進行時。vMk答案圈

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(  1  )注意正確運用過去進行時和一般過去時。vMk答案圈

(  2  )敘述事件時,前后往往要用提示性的語句使文章過渡自然,如this morning,one day等表示時間的時間狀語。vMk答案圈

(  3  )當兩個動作同時發(fā)生時,可用when,while,as soon as等連接。vMk答案圈

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1.按時間順序描述事故的經(jīng)過:This morning,I rode...At that time,I was listening to...vMk答案圈

2.提供兩條安全建議:when...don’t ride too fast,don’t...And we had better...vMk答案圈

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This morning,I rode a bike on my way to school.A bus stopped at the bus stop.At that time,I was listening to music,so I couldn’t be in time to put on the brake.I hit the back of the bus and fell off my bike.Luckily,I wasn’t badly hurt and a kind student helped me.I’m very sorry for that.I didn’t think about the risk of an accident.So when we’re on our bikes,don’t ride too fast,don’t ride side by side with friends and don’t use our mobile phones.And we had better not listen to music.We must keep safe in the street.vMk答案圈