失敗乃成功之母。本卷閱讀理解B部分文章討論了失敗對(duì)于獲取成功具有重要的價(jià)值。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀闳绾谓梃bApple的成功經(jīng)驗(yàn)，采取有效行動(dòng)，變失敗為成功。2EP答案圈

寫作要點(diǎn)：2EP答案圈

1. What have you learned from Apple's story?2EP答案圈

2. Have you ever experienced a failure?2EP答案圈

What was it?2EP答案圈

3. What will you do to turn it into a success?2EP答案圈

要求：2EP答案圈

1. 短文應(yīng)包括提示中所有的寫作要點(diǎn)，條理清晰，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮：2EP答案圈

2. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名：2EP答案圈

3. 詞數(shù)不少于80。2EP答案圈

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分析：2EP答案圈

內(nèi)容：敘述失敗的故事，采取怎樣的行動(dòng)，化失敗為成功2EP答案圈

時(shí)態(tài)：敘述部分，一般過去時(shí)（主要）；議論部分，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，一般將來時(shí)。注意看問句的時(shí)態(tài)2EP答案圈

易錯(cuò)詞匯：failure 不可數(shù)，失敗；可數(shù)，失敗的人或事。success 不可數(shù)，成功；可數(shù)，成功的人或事2EP答案圈

閱讀理解B部分關(guān)于Apple的故事總結(jié)：2EP答案圈

蘋果手機(jī)有缺陷，銷量不好，喬布斯心有執(zhí)念，尋找改善方法，最終走向成功2EP答案圈

關(guān)鍵詞：failure, believed in, successful2EP答案圈

可借鑒之處：2EP答案圈

1. 有信心，不放棄（belief）2EP答案圈

2. 尋求解決辦法（action）2EP答案圈

Para.1 總結(jié)2EP答案圈

① From Apple's story, I have learned that success doesn't come naturally and it requires strong belief and effective action.2EP答案圈

② I have learned that failure is valuable, which may lead to success sooner or later if we make full use of it.2EP答案圈

③ I have learned that we should never give up when facing difficulties in our daily life2EP答案圈

Para.2 敘述失敗經(jīng)歷2EP答案圈

1. 過渡：2EP答案圈

① It reminds me of my own experience.2EP答案圈

② It brings back my own experience.2EP答案圈

2. 敘事：2EP答案圈

交代時(shí)間、事件2EP答案圈

① There was a time when ~2EP答案圈

② When I was ten, ~2EP答案圈

③ At the age of ~2EP答案圈

④ During ~2EP答案圈

交代結(jié)果2EP答案圈

① I didn't ~2EP答案圈

② I failed to ~2EP答案圈

③ Since then, I have ~2EP答案圈

Para.3 行動(dòng)（重點(diǎn)）2EP答案圈

① I will do my best to ~2EP答案圈

② I will improve the method of ~2EP答案圈

③ I decide to do ~2EP答案圈

④ I make every effort to do ~2EP答案圈

范文：2EP答案圈

After reading the passage, I have learned that success doesn't come naturally and it requires strong belief and effective action.2EP答案圈

The story brings back a failure of mine. To celebrate Mother's Day, I made an attempt to cook a meal for my mom. To my sadness, it ended up with failure because the food was either salty or spicy. Since then, I haven't cooked a second meal.2EP答案圈

However, Steve Jobs' story encourages me to face the failure correctly. At first, I should believe in myself and never give up. Only if so will I take action to improve my cooking skills. Besides, I decide to try more times to make the food more delicious, as the saying goes, practice makes perfect.2EP答案圈

個(gè)人感受：2EP答案圈

1. 作為學(xué)生，年紀(jì)尚小，經(jīng)歷的失敗大多是考試失利。個(gè)人認(rèn)為在考場(chǎng)寫作時(shí)能夠規(guī)避“爛大街”的內(nèi)容，盡量規(guī)避，當(dāng)然前提是這樣做時(shí)間夠，可以保證分更高。2EP答案圈

2. 借鑒蘋果的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，采取有效行動(dòng)是重點(diǎn)。2EP答案圈