保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物海報(bào)設(shè)計(jì)大賽英語(yǔ)作文 關(guān)于保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物海報(bào)設(shè)計(jì)大賽的英語(yǔ)作文

假定你是李華,你的英國(guó)朋友 David 準(zhǔn)備參加以 "保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物"為主題的海報(bào)設(shè)計(jì)大賽,現(xiàn)就參賽作品初稿征求你的意見(jiàn).請(qǐng)回復(fù)郵件,內(nèi)容包括:1.提出存在的問(wèn)題;2.提出修改建議。aTg答案圈

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Dear David,aTg答案圈

Having reviewed your initial draft for the poster design competition on "Protecting Wildlife", I’m writing to offer some suggestions for improvement.aTg答案圈

Your design seems to lack a message that can motivate people to take action.aTg答案圈

Additionally, the quality of the images and the cluttered layout need to be improved.aTg答案圈

Therefore, I suggest you use a concise and convincing message and high-quality images relevant to the theme. Meanwhile, you’d better simplify the layout by removing some unnecessary elements that distract attention from the message.aTg答案圈

I hope my feedback is helpful. Best of luck with your design.aTg答案圈

Yours,aTg答案圈

Li HuaaTg答案圈