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Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should
1) interpret the chart, and
2) give your comments.
You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)
解析：
第一段主要是描述圖表。注意表述數據時，圖中有四五組數據，可以引入百分比的表達方式。
第二段給出評論，主要寫這種情況的原因。主要要結合圖表描述的內容從兩個方面寫起。一方面為什么為了欣賞風景而旅行的目的占37%，另一方面為什么緩解壓力會占到33%比例。
最后結尾段落可簡要得出結論
范文：
①The chart clearly illustrates the percentage of the different traveling purposes of students in a vertain university. ② According to the data given, we can easily see that the percentage of enjoying fascinating scenery is the highest, reaching roughly 37%, while relieving pressure, making friends, as well as cultivating independence account for about 33%, 9% and 6% respectively.
②The contributing factors responsible for this phenomenon can be summarized as follows.② First and foremost, with the rapid growth of the economy, the living standards of the Chinese people is also growing. It makes sense that traveling is affordable to a growing number of college students.③ What’s more, it must be stressed that the present situation, to a certain degree, stems from the benefits of traveling, including enriching their experience, upgrading their eyesight and enlarging their circle of acquaintances. ④ Last but not the least, traveling is also the best possible outlet for easing the young generation’s stress and anxiety, which is another significant factor that cannot be ignored.
Taking into account the points discussed so far, we can conclude that travelling not only offers college students a broader perspective of life, but is conducive to their psychological health as well.
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