假定你是李華,曾在你校工作的外教 Peter 得知你們最近搬遷到新校區(qū)學習,來信詢問新校區(qū)的情況,請你給他回封郵件,內(nèi)容包括:
1. 介紹新校區(qū)(地理位置,建筑布局,設施設備等);
2. 邀請他閑時來訪。
注意:
1. 詞數(shù)100左右;
2. 可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。
命題分析
與全國卷I書面表達特點比較:
1. 真實情景,都與外國友人或事件有關, 與學生的生活相關。
2. 體裁都是應用文,采用書信形式。學生需要了解書信的格式。
3. 都是半開放式作文,給出要點,但仍然給學生留有一定的自由發(fā)揮的空間,有利于學生充分展示自己的寫作能力。學生要學會補充信息,充實文章內(nèi)容。
官方范文
Dear Peter,
I am really glad to hear from you. Things have changed quite a lot since you were last at our school. The biggest change is probably our new campus which you might be interested to know more about. (寫信背景、寫信目的)
The new campus is more conveniently situated, within walking distance of the city center. As a result, now we have easier access to public facilities than before.(要點1.地理位置:主題句+拓展句) On campus, areas of different functions are scientifically laid out, with the modern teaching block standing in the middle, surrounded by other functional areas like the library, the gym and the stadium, etc. In all four corners of the campus lie beautiful gardens of different themes. Above all, equipped with a computer and a smart screen, the spacious classrooms help create an ideal atmosphere for our daily study.(要點2、3:建筑布局、設施設備)
Do remember to drop by when you have time! Our new campus is well worth a visit.(要點4:邀請閑時來訪)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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